Just in Time

hmm...my first real criticism is that her feminism seems to have been downplayed. This pose should be screaming with sexual and sensual energy, but it seems to be a wee bit lackluster. A view of the head tilted backward is; in my opinion, one of the hardest poses to grasp, and it seems you pulled it off adequately. However, her lips seem to be almost nonexistent. Heavier shadowing on her lower jaw would help to further express a sexy jawline and neck which is crucial for a female character. Her cleavage also requires greater shadowing to show off her breasts. Her shirt seems a bit loose, it would help to tighten it up to show off her curves. Aside from a lack of femininity and sexual energy, my only other comment is on that golden thing at their waistlines? What is it? Is he wearing it, or is she? I hope I have been helpful. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>